Writing poems about the moon is
probably as old as written language and might seem a bit “done.” However,
inspired by Midsummer Night on the 21st, immediately followed by a “supermoon,”
I thought it might be interesting to have a go at “lunar” poems this week—not
the typical or expected fare but, rather, moon poems that speak to the ways in
which we can take a familiar theme and make it “new.”
The goal this week is to approach
the moon from a fresh perspective, with memorable ideas and images that startle
(and, hopefully, delight) your readers. Be aware that your poem should address
the actual subject and should contain a deeper meaning as well. Remember that
really good poems often contain the shock of discovery—something
life-illuminating that happens when you write and when your poem is read.
Some Ideas to Consider:
1. A honeymoon (a get-away taken
by a man and a woman immediately after their marriage).
2. Moonshine whiskey (illegal
liquor, made by a “moonshiner” in a secret still).
3. An eclipse of the moon (when
the moon appears darkened as it passes through the earth’s shadow).
4. Being moonstruck (so in love
that one cannot think clearly or behave normally).
5. A mooncalf (a pejorative used to suggest that
someone is stupid, a blockhead, a fool, or otherwise not very intelligent).
6. Being “over the moon”
(extremely delighted about something).
7. “Shooting for the moon” (being
highly ambitious).
8. “Mooning about” (as in
hopelessly in love).
9. “Once in a blue moon”
(something that happens very rarely).
10. “Casting beyond the moon”
(making wild speculations).
11. “Moonlighting” (in the US,
having a night job in addition to day-time employment—in Australia, riding
after cattle at night—in the UK, illegal work—and in Ireland, once used to
describe violence carried out at night).
12. The famous line from the old
Honeymooners show in which Ralph Cramden (Jackie Gleason) says to his wife, “To
the moon, Alice!”
13. The man, or the rabbit, in the moon.
14. The old silliness about the moon being made of green
cheese.
15. The old fad
for “mooning” (referring to a bare, moon-like posterior displayed to passersby).
Examples:
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Brilliant, Adele!
ReplyDeleteI'm on holiday at the moment, enjoying a few days in the Cotswolds. Glorious (as is the moon image you used for this prompt).
Thanks, Jamie!
DeleteI love the Cotswolds, so lovely and picturesque, like spending time in a different century.
Enjoy your holiday!
Just visited your blog to check out the new prompt and noticed the "Dog Poetry" video in your sidebar. Too funny!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Rich! Glad you enjoyed the humor.
DeleteI forgot to say that what you always call the "dismount" was hilarious.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it, Rich!
Delete- PEBBLE IN THE POND -
ReplyDeleteOut, out they go in
rippled waves, undulating
smokey-mirrored rings
these concentrics, like
Orbs in clouded Spaces there
about Diana
E'er Supernal,
now circles for Faces gone
to places else... Yet
out they go & go...
these rings apulse aquivered
beyond this Sun and
Antipode, awash
in clouded Moonslight...out &
out - Oh!, not-so-brief
Candles - beyond Space
Antivort, as sponge Re-re-
flections of an-
nulus Consequence!
Unicentric wavepercusses -
Bom!...Bom!...Bom!... Eurhyth-
mically "Telltale Poets"...
Time... Non Esse! And yet they go...
out...&...out....&...out...
from cloudy-headed
Places... Echoes through soundless
Space, these filaments
to a Billions Years'
devolution, alas the
Pebble in the Pond
To what Heaven this
Hell hath wrought from throbbed circums
of our obliqued Lives!?
H.e.m-O’H’H.
1.12.MMvii.
(Ad Astra Per Aspera)
Two Shea
Thanks so much for posting, Haro! I was wondering where you were. Hope all is well.
DeleteThanks for sharing!
DeleteAK & JM - Pleased you're pleased; I'd been "de-commissioned," as It were. This piece travels, however we ought not ever attempt (try) to out-distance our Self, for in the theory of Universal Circularity - like radio waves - It returns to serve notice.
DeleteC' était, dans la nuit brune,
ReplyDeleteSur le clocher jauni,
La lune
Comme un point sur un i.
Alfred de Musset (1810 - 1857)
Was,in the dark night,
on the faded steeple,
the moon
like a dot on the i.
trad. A Pancirolli (1954 - ??)!
Brilliant, Jago! I like your translation better than the original!
DeleteThanks so much for posting.
Jago,
DeleteIt's always such a pleasure to read your translations! Thank you for sharing with us. (What an amazing image at the end.)
Tres bien!
DeleteLovely, Adele, brilliant example poems, and a beautiful image of the moon to inspire the writing.
ReplyDeleteMáire Ó Cathail (Ireland)