You’ve all probably heard of “selfies,”
pictures we take of ourselves and then post on smartphones or social media such
as Facebook. Some of these are funny. I even posted a close-up of my dog’s face
on Facebook and noted that it was his own selfie. In a more literary/poetic
mode, I recently re-read part of Whitman’s “Song of Myself” and got to thinking
about “selfie poems” (poems that poets have written to be specifically “definitions”
of themselves). There certainly are a lot of them, but I thought that, perhaps,
a “selfie poem” with a slight twist might be interesting to try. So … this
week, the challenge is to write a poem in which your past self talks to your present
self.
Think in terms of who you were
and who you are right now.
Guidelines:
Begin by jotting down some character
traits and experiences from your past (list, scribble).
Then, do the same thing and jot
down some current character traits and experiences.
Think about what made you who you
were and what makes you who you are.
Think about how you define
yourself. What things define you?
After you’ve gotten some ideas, you
might try writing in a dialogue format, going back and forth between “past” and
“present.” (Of course, any form with
which you’re comfortable is fine.)
Tips:
Try using a few questions as a
technique for expressing content and holding reader interest.
Experiment with sound—try to
create a sense of music in your poem through alliteration, assonance, consonance,
internal rhymes, off rhyme (also called slant rhyme and near rhyme), and
anaphora. Use auditory imagery: give an impression of how something sounds
though images.
Be sure to use concrete rather
than abstract images. Change abstract words into concrete words when you
revise.
Subvert the ordinary: see and
show things in a new, exciting way. Take something ordinary and turn it upside
down (subvert it).
Don’t overwrite—remember that
less can be more.
Examples:
"Song of Myself" By Walt Whitman
http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poem/174745
"Self Portrait" By Robert Creeley
http://www.poetryinvoice.com/poems/self-portrait
"A Dialogue of Self and Soul"
http://allpoetry.com/A-Dialogue-Of-Self-And-Soul
I was going to post a photo selfie but realized that we can't post images as comments. Ah, well ...
ReplyDeleteI love this prompt idea -- interesting to consider how many poems are really written selfies.
I didn't realize you can post a picture as a comment. I'm so sorry! What a shame! Glad you like the prompt, though.
DeleteMy students are going to love this. The plan is to have them take selfies with their smart phones and then write using the selfies as inspiration. Maybe some will post their pics and poems on Facebook.
ReplyDeleteGreat idea to use selfie photos to get the writing process started.
DeleteGreat idea and so "current." I really like the images you use for each prompt.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Sandy. I get many of the images from a royalty free public domain site. It's fun searching for images that fit the prompts.
DeleteLife is like that
ReplyDeleteWhere are you going, child?
I am going to find out how to live.
Have you?
Yes.
Why did it take you so long?
I was bound tightly
by convention and religion
Are you unbounded now?
I am
I am free
free to be
Nice, Risa! Kind of like a declaration of independence from your child self to your adult self. Concise and to the point—your signature style!!!! Thanks for sharing with us.
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