The weather here has been unbearably hot and humid (8-10 consecutive days in the 90s, and 104º F. in today’s forecast) – not great weather for writing much of
anything. So … I thought it might be fun and interesting to
try writing monostitch poems this week.
A
monostitch poem is a freestanding, one-line poem, balanced in its own time and place. Historically, the monostitch dates to
ancient times (reportedly including the Roman poet Marcus Valerius Martialis, though I was unable to locate any examples). The form received attention again in late nineteenth century Russia when
Valery Bryusov published this single-line poem in 1894:
О закрой свои бледные ноги.
(Oh, cover
your pale legs.)
I’ve found a few “rules for monostitch poems” that may serve as guidelines for
your writing this week.
A monostitch poem:
- should be a single line composed from 6 -12 syllables (though the syllable count is entirely flexible),
- should include at least one figure of speech (a metaphor, but never a simile because similes require more words), personification, or other poetic device,
- should not have any punctuation other than a capital letter at the beginning and terminal punctuation (period, question mark, or exclamation point) at the end,
- should be a complete thought and not a phrase or fragment,
- should express a complete idea or theme in such a way that the meaning and nuance of the poem is clear.
Example:
Coward by
R. A. Ammons
Bravery
runs in my family.
Now, find a cool spot, a shady place, a bench beneath the
trees, or crank up the AC indoors and give monostitch poems a try. Here’s
something to consider: maybe your monostitch will serve as a springboard for a
longer poem. If that happens, go with it and see where your one-liner leads you!
What a "COOL" idea! Something short and sweet to beat the heat (is that a poem?)
ReplyDeleteSeriously, I'd not heard of this type of poetry before - there's always something interesting to learn on your blog! Thanks, Adele!
Jamie
Thanks for your kind words, Jamie!
DeleteFun idea. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteSo glad you enjoyed it, Jan! Thanks for your comment!
DeleteJAGO BIO INFO by Alessandro Panciroli.
ReplyDeleteIo non sono quello che sono
I am not what I am.
A perfect monostitch, Jago! Thanks for posting!
Delete(We should have sent that to the magazine!)
You are right!
DeleteLet's sent it...
Very nice, Jago! I think you got the spirit of the monostitch perfectly!
DeleteJamie
The tassel on my
ReplyDeleteLucky Chinese
Buddha Beans
is gently swaying.
Wonderfully visual and with a bit of nuance that's intriguing. Thanks for posting, Risa!
DeleteThanks for sharing this, Risa! I like the serenity of it.
DeleteJamie
I don't think this complies with the rules 100%, but I like this original piece (hope you do, too)....
ReplyDeleteThank God for Dentists
the sons of bitches.
Thanks for sharing, Danny!
DeleteWritten with feeling after a scary afternoon today:
ReplyDeleteROUTINE VISIT
Fear stalks his prey when least expected
Perfect! You hit the poem "right on the head" with the title and content! Thanks so much for sharing.
DeleteInteresting. I learnt something new today - Monostitch Poems. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the info.
Thanks so much for your comment, Hui Min. I'm glad to know that you found the prompt useful!
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