When Elizabeth Barrett Browning
published Poems in 1850, I doubt if
she would have imagined that a sonnet in that collection (“How Do I Love Thee?”
Sonnet 43) would become world famous or that its title would be the source for
a prompt topic on a 21st century blog. But here it is …
Lest you begin to think that our
prompt this week is cupid-driven, let me assure you that we’re not going to
write love poems—we’re just using a certain spin on a famous love poem as a prompt
title to jump-start our writing.
Here’s the idea: Adopt the
persona of one of your neighbors and write a poem that tells how that neighbor
sees (thinks about) you. You may prefer to be serious with this or you may go
for a lighter, humorous tone.
This week, pay special attention to sound (the music in your poem) through use of alliteration, assonance, dissonance, anaphora, and internal and scattered rhymes.
Some Things to Think About:
1. What does the neighbor think
of you? Why?
2. What does the neighbor believe
about you? Why?
3. What does the neighbor hear
through your open windows?
4. What does the neighbor see or
hear of your personal life?
5. What does the neighbor think
he or she knows about you (correctly or incorrectly)?
6. Can you use the famous line
from Robert Frost’s “Mending Wall” (“Good neighbors make good fences”) as an
epigraph or to enhance meaning within your poem? "Mending Wall" by Robert Frost
7. On the flip side, what don’t your neighbors “see” about you and
your life?
8. An alternative idea is to write a poem about a neighbor (or neighbors); and a second alternative is to write a poem about the image at the top.
Examples:
Alas, I wasn’t able to find any
example poems that quite fit this prompt, but I did find one “neighbor” poem
that you might enjoy: "The Good Neighbour" by John Burnside
Brilliant, Adele! Old EBB would probably go into a faint over this prompt, which makes me wonder what my neighbours in the adjoining flats think they 'know' about me.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jamie! I like that picture too.
DeleteForgot to add that clicking on the picture gives an even better view of its weirdly wonderful subject matter.
ReplyDeleteAnother nice prompt, for which thanks.
ReplyDeleteI just scrolled down the sidebar and saw that you added a video of Chaucey's birthday. He's one sweet little guy. I have two Yorkies and really enjoyed the video. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks so much, Madeline! It's good to hear that you enjoyed the video. My best to you and your Yorkies.
DeleteJust for fun (again). Something about neighbours. Not real poetry but, I hope, worth a smile.
ReplyDeleteThey see thin,
they see me tall;
I wish they didn't
see me at all.
I know they're there
hiding wide;
I close my window
and try to hide.
I don't even know
their faces or names,
and I don't want to play
their neighbourly games.
To keep them at bay,
I've erected a fence
and hope for more privacy
starting hence!
Hello again, Anonymous! Thanks for posting your poem.
DeleteOf course, this is "real" poetry. Some poems are meant for pure enjoyment and, yes, I certainly did smile when I read this one.
This is great fun! Thanks for posting! (Who says poetry has to be serious?)
DeleteWelcome to Poopville
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Poopville
where giant dog turds lay
under your window
their odor wafting aromatically through
and
iridescent Florida Blue Flies swarm, too
Welcome to Poopville
where the law matters not
and neighbors matter even less
Welcome to Poopville
where living is convenient
and
costs are high
just not high enough
to have a sign
$500 fine
for leaving your dog's doo
behind
I think a lot of people can identify with this. Back home, when I was a child in East Anglia, we had neighbours whose pets relieved themselves on our lawn all the time. Those awful brown stains were very frustrating!
DeleteLove the title, Risa! And the poem says it all. Thanks so much for sharing.
DeleteI just ordered The Crafty Poet. Congrats to Diane Lockward and to all the poets included. Thanks for posting the announcement in your sidebar.
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