tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6272430209314356497.post4523105857978445630..comments2024-01-18T05:29:43.265-05:00Comments on The Music In It: Adele Kenny's Poetry Blog: Prompt #264 – Making More of Revision by Guest Prompter Diane LockwardADELE KENNYhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09556261298519747516noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6272430209314356497.post-69788194038455841772016-10-17T13:52:22.291-04:002016-10-17T13:52:22.291-04:00=/\../\= Thanks, Adele!=/\../\= Thanks, Adele!Risahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06554583053304327137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6272430209314356497.post-42784599725912089662016-10-17T11:19:46.961-04:002016-10-17T11:19:46.961-04:00Thanks so much for sharing your poem, Risa! As alw...Thanks so much for sharing your poem, Risa! As always, your style speaks to compression and nuance. I like the way this poem begins with a strong visual image and then moves into the "mystical."ADELE KENNYhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09556261298519747516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6272430209314356497.post-35613946721536719552016-10-17T11:18:04.900-04:002016-10-17T11:18:04.900-04:00Thanks so much for your comment, Sandy. I'm su...Thanks so much for your comment, Sandy. I'm sure Diane will be happy to know you have her books and enjoy them!ADELE KENNYhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09556261298519747516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6272430209314356497.post-75393903503375730362016-10-17T11:17:10.227-04:002016-10-17T11:17:10.227-04:00Thanks so much for your comment, Jamie. If you ord...Thanks so much for your comment, Jamie. If you order a copy of Crafty II, you won't be disappointed!ADELE KENNYhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09556261298519747516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6272430209314356497.post-20349559094239528132016-10-16T10:33:04.584-04:002016-10-16T10:33:04.584-04:00Costumes
she stripped down to her underwear
then
...Costumes<br /><br />she stripped down to her underwear<br />then<br />slowly stripped down to her bones<br />still<br />not enough<br />she reached deep into her being<br />found the child<br />and crossed over<br /><br />Risahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06554583053304327137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6272430209314356497.post-10574718149302902752016-10-16T09:04:18.639-04:002016-10-16T09:04:18.639-04:00Always a pleasure to enjoy prompts by Diane Lockwa...Always a pleasure to enjoy prompts by Diane Lockward. BTW, I have both editions of Crafty and all of Diane's books! Thanks Adele and Diane.Sandy R.noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6272430209314356497.post-9776575818767872022016-10-15T17:10:49.568-04:002016-10-15T17:10:49.568-04:00I have the first volume and have found it to be ve...I have the first volume and have found it to be very helpful when I have the proverbial 'writer's block'. Looks like I'll have to order Volume II!Jamie Morrisnoreply@blogger.com