tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6272430209314356497.post342525387796550199..comments2024-01-18T05:29:43.265-05:00Comments on The Music In It: Adele Kenny's Poetry Blog: Prompt #234 – One Sentence LongADELE KENNYhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09556261298519747516noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6272430209314356497.post-72597062559756654792015-10-14T12:45:21.905-04:002015-10-14T12:45:21.905-04:00=/\../\==/\../\=Risahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06554583053304327137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6272430209314356497.post-33222892570921746712015-10-14T09:09:49.476-04:002015-10-14T09:09:49.476-04:00Really nice, Risa! Your style -- concise, no nonse...Really nice, Risa! Your style -- concise, no nonsense -- is always such a pleasure. I really enjoy your poems!Jamie Morrisnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6272430209314356497.post-79227313261560622362015-10-13T05:25:07.676-04:002015-10-13T05:25:07.676-04:00I love your poem, Risa!I love your poem, Risa!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6272430209314356497.post-37511360528157660982015-10-13T05:09:14.329-04:002015-10-13T05:09:14.329-04:00Thank you, Jamie. Single sentence poems are great ...Thank you, Jamie. Single sentence poems are great fun. They seem to work as the catalyst for all sorts of ideas and exploring different ways of writing. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6272430209314356497.post-42890962712629593982015-10-12T16:28:28.066-04:002015-10-12T16:28:28.066-04:00Beautiful, Risa! I can picture you and Fatty sitti...Beautiful, Risa! I can picture you and Fatty sitting there.ADELE KENNYhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09556261298519747516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6272430209314356497.post-49652960497521405272015-10-12T16:26:26.008-04:002015-10-12T16:26:26.008-04:00Another Sunday
Sitting together
Fatty and I
while...Another Sunday<br /><br />Sitting together<br />Fatty and I<br />while birds sing cheerfully outside,<br />the fan whirs, and my crocheted shirt<br />grows longer and longer,<br />we no longer feel<br />the passage of time<br /> Risahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06554583053304327137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6272430209314356497.post-82571024764662816672015-10-12T16:16:13.471-04:002015-10-12T16:16:13.471-04:00Very nice, Lewis! Just goes to show what we can do...Very nice, Lewis! Just goes to show what we can do in a single sentence!Jamie Morrisnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6272430209314356497.post-7179640551359107882015-10-12T12:45:04.889-04:002015-10-12T12:45:04.889-04:00Hi, Risa, it's a pleasure to read your poems--...Hi, Risa, it's a pleasure to read your poems--I'm always curious to see your response to the prompts :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6272430209314356497.post-31187464811566402492015-10-12T12:18:53.358-04:002015-10-12T12:18:53.358-04:00You're very welcome, Lewis! I'm so glad to...You're very welcome, Lewis! I'm so glad to know that you find the prompts helpful. Thank you again for sharing your work with us!ADELE KENNYhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09556261298519747516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6272430209314356497.post-79441276360630816652015-10-12T09:20:50.766-04:002015-10-12T09:20:50.766-04:00I may have an idea for a poem and after reading yo...I may have an idea for a poem and after reading your prompt the piece takes an unexpected/surprising direction. <br /><br />Thank you, Adele, for taking the time to provide your weekly and inspirational prompts :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6272430209314356497.post-71772756817055919962015-10-11T14:04:01.648-04:002015-10-11T14:04:01.648-04:00Lewis!Lewis!Risahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06554583053304327137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6272430209314356497.post-88000549136350762602015-10-10T16:38:42.286-04:002015-10-10T16:38:42.286-04:00Thanks for sharing this, Lewis! I really like wher...Thanks for sharing this, Lewis! I really like where the prompt took you! There's a great image-driven surreal quality.ADELE KENNYhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09556261298519747516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6272430209314356497.post-20871981604053764002015-10-10T16:37:24.932-04:002015-10-10T16:37:24.932-04:00Love your comment, Jamie, for which my thanks! Hav...Love your comment, Jamie, for which my thanks! Have fun with the prompt.ADELE KENNYhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09556261298519747516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6272430209314356497.post-30763892484791796472015-10-10T15:36:56.810-04:002015-10-10T15:36:56.810-04:00Hi, Adele,
I read the title of Linda Pastan'...Hi, Adele, <br /><br />I read the title of Linda Pastan's poem 'The New Dog' as The New Day, which became the inspiration (along with this week's prompt) for my poem — <br /><br /><br /><br />Europe, 1914-1918 <br /><br /><br />An owl blinks at the blood of the moon <br /><br />over salmon that leap from nightmare-trenches <br /><br />to the open sea where fear gives way to the smile of <br /><br />the sun over an oystercatcher seabird in white <br /><br />shirt and straw sunhat and Siegfried Sassoon <br /><br />out on the seafront with his dog that laps at <br /><br />the new dawn in a frisbee. <br /><br /><br />~ ~ ~ <br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6272430209314356497.post-1530349763526742772015-10-10T11:40:27.865-04:002015-10-10T11:40:27.865-04:00Great fun and a great challenge, to dig deeply and...Great fun and a great challenge, to dig deeply and to write without boring the reader, and look, this is a one-sentence response to your prompt!Jamie Morrisnoreply@blogger.com